Changes to our Story

Me and Frankie decided for our story that we would have three different locations these would be Swan Meadows, Waitrose car park, and Radwinter. However, after recording the first scene it came to our attention that it was over 40 seconds long which was quite a long time seeing as we only have 2 minutes to record the whole intro. We decided to keep this scene but to not have the Radwinter scene as it would be over 2 minutes long and the story wouldn't make any sense. This was a good idea because in the first scene we see Frankie almost running away from someone this creates a lot of tension, also in the Waitrose scene at the end we see Frankie dazing off into a deep sleep he then sees a blurry vision of a masked figure, this will make a great ending to the film and make it have a lot of tension. We both agreed on doing this and we though it would benefit us the most.